My general subject is on juicing. I am focusing on the unhealthy side of too much juicing. I am trying to argue for people to stop juicing. Most of the sources that I have used came from online.
http://momsagainstcooties.com/kitchen-tools-appliances-hiding-places-for-germs/
http://health.usnews.com/health-news/blogs/eat-run/2013/09/06/9-germiest-kitchen-tools-and-appliances
http://www.livescience.com/38694-keeping-calories-from-juice-in-check.html
https://www.mediweightlossclinics.com/patients/resources/articles/obesity-facts/
http://www.webmd.com/cholesterol-management/obesity-health-risks
http://healthyeating.sfgate.com/longterm-risks-low-fiber-1267.html
http://summertomato.com/6-things-to-consider-before-buying-a-juicer-other-tips-for-fruit-vegetable-juicing-2/
My steps would be to organize each of my points in paragraphs. Each paragraph’s main idea would be one of the dangers of juicing. I follow with the information that I found online. Finally i would end each of those paragraphs with why it is important and how it relates to my thesis.
Some of the problems that i might face it the fact that most people feel that juicing is good for you. This means that most information that i find might argue against my thesis.
hey interesting topic, but I feel as though you may have trouble turing it into a research paper. Also the sources you used may not be reliable as they don't end in .org or .edu so they could be based on peoples opinions rather than facts. You may want to reconsider choosing a different topic but that up to you i'm not a professor just someone that's supposed to comment on your blog :).
ReplyDeleteYour topic sound interesting but what do you mean by unhealthy side of juicing? Do you think about chemicals in juices sell in chain restaurants? If you will be more clear about that it will be easier to defend your position .
ReplyDeletei think you should be more detailed about your topic and be more clear.
ReplyDeleteit sounds good but im a little confused
ReplyDeletei didnt know jucing had a unhealthy side. it looks like i going to learn something new.
ReplyDeleteThe topic would be an interesting one but I think its gonna be harder to talk about since so much info is pushed for the benefits on juicing. Good Luck~
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